Chrysalis reminded me a lot of Mewtwo from Pokemon. She was an exceptional villian with real vision and a great plan. Her downfall wasn't her quality, but that she had the unfortunate circumstances of being born in a kid's show, instead of something more adult. Even if she were to jump to something for the 13-16 demigraph, she could go so far.
Simply wonderful. Wonderful words, bit dark, but nice. Creepy-looking and well "narrated" design and art. Love it. If I could do a critique it would be: 4,5 stars on Impact (Well it IS impactant). 4 stars on Originality (Old topic, brand new way to narrate it). 5 stars (if possible) in Vision (it was a good idea making it). 5 stars in Technique (Creepy and scary, well drawn concept).